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Fear November 3, 2006

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I won’t look you in the eyes

Because I don’t want people to see

How much it hurts inside

It rips me apart from the dephts of my core

To know I am so broken

A woman scorn

Torn from the man she loves

Expected to move on

Forget the past that she loves

But I let you help me pick up the pieces

With the hope of becoming whole once again

No glue

No tape

No attachments

Just you and me

And the false love inbetween

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bratnicole14's avatar 1. bratnicole14 - November 4, 2006

What a relationship. Wow, I love this piece, it’s strong, and beuatiful, all in one. It’s really lyrically, almost like it’s pieces of a song. It’s really wonderful.

Jeff Pullium's avatar 2. Jeff Pullium - November 17, 2006

No glue
No tape
No attachments
Just you and me
And the false love inbetween

I love this part!!!!
You have a typo on line 4

Misz Tweety's avatar 3. Misz Tweety - November 17, 2006

thanks I didn’t even notice the typo and branicole14 I am making a song out of this thanks to u

praebeoverbum's avatar 4. praebeoverbum - March 26, 2007

i like it. it’s really discriptive. and it … it reaches out and alot of ppl can connect with it, or at least feel for it. it’s really well written.


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