Fear November 3, 2006
Posted by misztweety in misztweety.trackback
I won’t look you in the eyes
Because I don’t want people to see
How much it hurts inside
It rips me apart from the dephts of my core
To know I am so broken
A woman scorn
Torn from the man she loves
Expected to move on
Forget the past that she loves
But I let you help me pick up the pieces
With the hope of becoming whole once again
No glue
No tape
No attachments
Just you and me
And the false love inbetween
What a relationship. Wow, I love this piece, it’s strong, and beuatiful, all in one. It’s really lyrically, almost like it’s pieces of a song. It’s really wonderful.
No glue
No tape
No attachments
Just you and me
And the false love inbetween
I love this part!!!!
You have a typo on line 4
thanks I didn’t even notice the typo and branicole14 I am making a song out of this thanks to u
i like it. it’s really discriptive. and it … it reaches out and alot of ppl can connect with it, or at least feel for it. it’s really well written.