February 15, 2007
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He sees the naked me
Underneath fake smiles and forced laughs
He knows the true emotion
I hide behind my jokes, my long-lasting conversation about absolutely nothing
He sees me: flawed, so imperfect and misconstrued
He knows my twisted thoughts
My meaningless laughter, my passion
I overwhelm him with stories I’ve never told
Secrets I’ve always kept, blood I never shed
And he accepts me
ALL of me, with my changes of heart, mind and eye color
Styles and names only clothe me
While beneath it is a me
So very chaotic
DFA Writes 
I like this a lot, there’s a lot of raw emotion hidden in there. It makes me feel like I’m reading something really private and personal, and that sense of pure honesty is refreshing.
wow. this is really good. i like it alot. it made me take a step back and look into the depths of my life…. (that sounded corny. sorry) but it think that’s what certain kinds of literature should do… and this does it well. very well, indeed.
Brandi I hope you’re coming to our show this Friday. It’s called “A Night of Words Under the Stars” it’s at 7 in the ampitheater. I miss you.
-Laura