Blue November 20, 2008
Posted by keepdreaming3 in Uncategorized.trackback
The color of the sky
the roariing ocean waves
….to be continued
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DFA Writes 
I’m assuming the third line is actually part of the poem.
This strikes me as a very nice haiku, but it’s not. It is 6-6-5. If you wanted it to be a haiku, it wouldn’t be hard to change it, but even if you leave it alone it will still be a pleasently concise piece.
who are you that wrote this? is it erica? i like this alot