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Fallen. December 5, 2008

Posted by austino33 in Uncategorized.
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I don’t look at you like I used to.

I tried to hate you, I tried to make your life miserable without me.

Sad thing was, I was miserable without you.

I tried to make things work in your absence. They didn’t.

 

I don’t look at you like I used to.

I will always remember the our first kiss,  and the peek of you I stole.

You really loved me then didn’t you?

I tried to erase you and all the times I saw you from my memory. I couldn’t.

 

I don’t look at you like I used to.

You see, we’re not the same people we were when we first got together.

We’ll never be able to pick up the pieces and rebuild it all.

We’ll never be able to see each other the same.

 

I don’t look at you like I used to.

I love you, and I’ve become blind to looks or stolen glances.

I love you, I missed you, and regardless of how tore down we were, I need you back.

W’re not the same, but love never changes, does it?

 

So let’s fall back in love. Nothing is stopping us but ourselves.

When people ask me what happened between me and you, I want a one word answer: “Fallen.”

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Madison's avatar 1. Madison - December 16, 2008

Awwww! this one is sweet! and sad at the same time 😦 I didn’t know you wrote poetry, they are good!

praebeoverbum's avatar 2. praebeoverbum - December 19, 2008

hey dawg,
i really love your writing. OK, here’s what i gots to say on this piece. it’s really good. something you might try is giving the reader through more images and word plays, instead of sort of … spoonfeeding it to them, if you will. this is just a suggestion but other than that one thing it’s really an awesome piece. play with it some more and you’ve got a winner.


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