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Exactly. January 28, 2009

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He leaned over the mirror, straw in hand.
“why you like that shit so much?”
he turns.
pause.
” ’cause men would rather embrace demons than be  shadows.” 
 snort.
cough.
“you see my freind,” he continued, “in a world where no means yes, mirrors hide monsters and everybody’s lookin for someone, everybody’s somebody’s someone that nobody knows of. You dig?”  
“i dunno…” 
smile.
“Exactly.”

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bratnicole14's avatar 1. bratnicole14 - January 29, 2009

I really enjoyed this piece i love the flow of it and the descriptions that you used. This piece shows great talent.

andrea davis's avatar 2. andrea davis - January 29, 2009

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

chipmunkeyy's avatar 3. chipmunkeyy - January 29, 2009

ooommmgggg.

it’s like,
the rawness of your language & the bluntness of the whole thing is just… wow.

and it’s funny lol.

but that spiel [sp?] at the end about “everybody’s somebody’s… knows of. you dig?” is ridiculously true.
quite profound, really.

praebeoverbum's avatar 4. praebeoverbum - January 29, 2009

awww.
thanks guys.
*blush*
🙂

chipmunkeyy's avatar 5. chipmunkeyy - January 30, 2009

you’re welcome !!


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